You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The bar chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The bar chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the last year.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
This
Chart indicates the average of unlearned people in different areas between women and men in the year 2000. In the overview, Females show a greater
number
of illiteracy in all regions
while
males are much more educated in all areas. Looking at the graph, in Sub-Saharan Africa, an Arab state, and South Asia there is a huge spike in unlearned women between 48% to 55%.
However
, the illiteracy males in these three countries shared almost the same ups between 28
percent
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to 32
percent
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per cent
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. Talking about Developed countries, Latin America, and East Asia, had a drastic downfall in both genders, but the illiteracy of females is much higher than males. The maximum
number
of uneducated women is levelled off by 20
percent
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per cent
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and the minimum is about 2
percent
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whereas
the maximum
number
of unlearned men is about half of the
females
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female's
females'
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number
and the minimum is about 1%.
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