The bar chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The bar chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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Chart indicates the average of unlearned people in different areas between women and men in the year 2000. In the overview, Females show a greater
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of illiteracy in all regions
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males are much more educated in all areas. Looking at the graph, in Sub-Saharan Africa, an Arab state, and South Asia there is a huge spike in unlearned women between 48% to 55%.
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, the illiteracy males in these three countries shared almost the same ups between 28
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to 32
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. Talking about Developed countries, Latin America, and East Asia, had a drastic downfall in both genders, but the illiteracy of females is much higher than males. The maximum
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of uneducated women is levelled off by 20
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and the minimum is about 2
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whereas
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the maximum
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of unlearned men is about half of the
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and the minimum is about 1%.

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