You are going to work in another city for a year. A friend who lives there offered to help you find a place to live. Write a letter to your friend:  Express your gratitude to him/her  Describe the area that you want to live in  Explain what type of accommodation you are looking for

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Dear Jack, I am glad to know that you are assisting me to locate a house for me to live

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London. As you know that

this

would be for one year only.

Firstly

, I would like to thank you for your letter about getting rid of the stress of the accommodation from my head. My company's project will run for one year and they appointed me there as a Project manager.

Secondly

, the location of the project is near to the city centre, so I would prefer to find accommodation in the five-kilometre circular area. It would save me a lot of time for transportation and I could avoid heavy traffic in peak time by using local roads.

Finally

, about the type of building, I am flexible in

this

matter. as I am coming by myself only to London, you can look for me any convenient

such

as a studio room, apartment or even family sharing can be accepted. Thanks again for helping me. waiting for your reply. Yours lovingly, Mandeep Singh

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
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8 paragraphs

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

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You are going to work in another city for a year. A friend who lives there offered to help you find a place to live. Write a letter to your friend:  Express your gratitude to him/her  Describe the area that you want to live in  Explain what type of accommodation you are looking for

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Some believe the primary purpose of museums is to entertain people, while others believe their purpose is to educate. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some researchers believe that all children need to learn a musical instrument as part of their education. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

The charts below showa the total number of minutes in billions of telephone calls in the UK, devided into three categories, from1995-2002.

You want to join a new gym in your neighbourhood. Write a letter to the gym manager. In your letter ask what types of membership are available, and what the prices are ask what activities are available ask what the joining procedure is You should write at least 150 words.

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