Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that adveertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Dicuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Advertisement is
the
one of the extremely successful marketing strategies to convince a lot of consumers. Change the article
apply
On the other hand
, there are some reasons why people
do not longer pay attention to it.
Every advertising completely attract
many customers by their own advantages. Change the verb form
attracts
For example
, using advertisements
as a social media platform to encourage people
about an up to date social problems might have a huge impact on many people
's attention. Such
as, influencing a campaign about black-live matters or LGBTQ plus. Furthermore
, giving something in return to the social might empower other people
. For instance
, non-profit advertisements
administrate their income to help orphans or people
in rural areas.
On the contrary
, others argue that advertising can give various drawbacks. Even though our world has changed and approached a decade full of people
who have an open-minded personal attitude but there are still have
some inproperpriate Unnecessary verb
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advertisements
which contain a lot of abusive matters such
as sexual harassment or bullying both indirect
and direct ways Change the word
indirectly
such
as the
advertisement refers to the sexual matters without any warnings to whether children or those who are under eighteen years old. Correct article usage
apply
Besides
, a bunch of consumers misunderstood about
over-sell products that Change preposition
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trying
to avoid the facts. Wrong verb form
try
For instance
, a skincare advertisement claimed that acnes
will perfectly disappear for a week but in Correct your spelling
acne
medical
treatment process. There does not exist.
Add an article
the medical
To conclude
, people
gain both benefits and disadvantages from advertising. However
, the useful solution that can prevent causes and effects from the advertisements
are
having Correct subject-verb agreement
is
an
awareness which means customers should consider before Correct article usage
apply
decided
to purchase things. Wrong verb form
deciding
As well as
an entrepreneur must have sincerity
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the sincerity
to
the clients.Change preposition
with
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