Write a letter to the restaurant, applying for the job. In your letter: •explain what you are currently doing • describe your suitability for this area of work • say when you can attend an interview
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing an application for receptionist in your cafe.
Since I visited your website I saw a
job
vacancy option then
I decided to apply. Besides
this
, the receptionist work I was being looked
for many years. I am presently working as a receptionist Wrong verb form
has worked
in
the call. The role of my Change preposition
on
job
to
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is to
answering
the customers for a whole day. Wrong verb form
answer
Furthermore
, arranging the venue on special
day for people's demand. My Change the article
a special
job
description is
Unnecessary verb
apply
also
includes to guide
the customer for what they have Change the verb form
guiding
speciality
in our Add an article
a speciality
cusines
.
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cuisine
However
, I am working as a part-time employee in the telecom sector I want to quit this
job
because it is too hard for me to work in
the night shift. Change preposition
apply
Although
, I know the Iqbal town area for people's taste and what they want to change in your cafe.
As you mentioned in your site that
interviews will be held on Friday of Correct word choice
apply
this
week. I request you to please allow me to give interview
on Monday because of my mother's operation. If you give me Add an article
an interview
this
chance I'll be appreciated.
I am looking forward to hearing from you as soon as possible.
Yours Faithfully,Submitted by mobinadurrani43 on
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coherence cohesion
The logical structure of the letter is clear and follows a proper format. However, the greeting and closing could be improved by using more formal language.
coherence cohesion
Ensure that each paragraph focuses on a single idea and provide more specific examples and details to support your suitability for the job.
lexical resource
Expand your vocabulary by using more varied and precise words to enhance your writing.
grammatical range
Pay attention to sentence structure and grammar to improve the overall clarity of your writing.