Write a letter to the restaurant, applying for the job. In your letter: •explain what you are currently doing • describe your suitability for this area of work • say when you can attend an interview

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing an application for receptionist in your cafe. Since I visited your website I saw a

job

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vacancy option

then

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I decided to apply.

Besides

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this

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, the receptionist

work I was being looked

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has worked

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for many years. I am presently working as a receptionist

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the call. The role of my

job

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is to

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answering

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answer

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the customers for a whole day.

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, arranging the venue on

special

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a special

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day for people's demand. My

job

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description

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apply

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also

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includes

to guide

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guiding

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the customer for what they have

speciality

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a speciality

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in our

cusines

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cuisine

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, I am working as a part-time employee in the telecom sector I want to quit

this

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job

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because it is too hard for me to work

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apply

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the night shift.

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, I know the Iqbal town area for people's taste and what they want to change in your cafe. As you mentioned in your site

that

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apply

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interviews will be held on Friday of

this

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week. I request you to please allow me to give

interview

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an interview

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on Monday because of my mother's operation. If you give me

this

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chance I'll be appreciated. I am looking forward to hearing from you as soon as possible. Yours Faithfully,

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coherence cohesion

The logical structure of the letter is clear and follows a proper format. However, the greeting and closing could be improved by using more formal language.

coherence cohesion

Ensure that each paragraph focuses on a single idea and provide more specific examples and details to support your suitability for the job.

lexical resource

Expand your vocabulary by using more varied and precise words to enhance your writing.

grammatical range

Pay attention to sentence structure and grammar to improve the overall clarity of your writing.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
12
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

197 words

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