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Solution essay. The amount of obese people have grown, what should they do?

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Despite the improvement in social awareness for
healty
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healthy
lifestyle
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lifestyles
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, obesity is
the
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a
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 growing trend nowadays.
This
 essay will discuss
causes
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the causes
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 of the increased amount of
unhealty
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unhealthy
 food consumption and possible solution to improve
this
 problem in
the
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modern area. The two important causes of increased obesity are
unbalanced
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an unbalanced
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 diet and
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a sedantary
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sedantary
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sedentary
 lifestyle.
First,
improvement in technology
result
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results
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as
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in
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decreased
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a decreased
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 movement for
humans
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humans'
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 daily activities. Most
of
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apply
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the
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apply
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people prefer driving to walking or cycling for going
to
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somewhere.
For instance
, every
workplaces
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workplace
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 contain lots of park space which
are
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is
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 full during working hours. But there
are
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is
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 always available
area
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areas
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 for their bicycles. Most
of
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apply
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the
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scientists believe that regular activities ,which contain
low intensity
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low-intensity
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 movements, can be helpful for
loosing
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losing
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 weight and improving lean muscle mass in a long term.
Second,
eating
unhealty
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unhealthy
healthy
 meals, which contain
high
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a high
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amount
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amounts
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 of sugar or saturated fatty acids, can leads to
increase
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an increase
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body
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in body
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 weight and body mass index.
Thus
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This
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 results in many health problems
such
 as cardiovascular disease, diabetes and obesity which can be prevented with
more
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a more
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 balanced diet and
nutritions
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nutrition
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. In the modern
era
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 there are lots of
healty
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healthy
 and nutritious food available in
the
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supermarkets and grocery.
For example
, most of the markets sell organic products and supplements that contain
high
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a high
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amounth
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amounts
amount
 of protein which
assist
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assists
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to
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in
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loose
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lose
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 weight. In conclusion,
sedantary
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sedentary
peoples
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people
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 and people who consume unbalanced food are destined to
being
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be
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 overweight.
This
 is obviously accepted
with
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by
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 some people and possible solutions for
this
 health problem are balanced
nutritions
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nutrition
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 and being active during life, indeed.
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