The chart shows how frequently people in the USA ate fast food in restaurants between 2003 and 2013

The chart shows how frequently people in the USA ate fast food in restaurants between 2003 and 2013
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This
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bar chart represents data on how often the population of America consumed junk food
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6 different times 2003,2006 and 2013.
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it is clear that
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, once an occasion and
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once or twice season preferences are the most popular, each day and never is the least popular during the whole period of time.
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,2003 the highest proportion comes to once a
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with 31%
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once or twice a month with a 1% difference making it 30%. The same trend repeated in 2006 and 2013 once a
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and twice a month is 33% and 25% respectively
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in 2013 twice a month has beaten once a
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at 33 and 27% in turn. ,
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we can notice that eating fast food several times a
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is between 15 and 20%, the highest figure was in 2006 with 20% as it comes to 2003 and 2013 it was 17 and 16% after that comes a few times year it started at 13% in 2003 and was stable at15% between 2006 and 2013.
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, every day and never indicators hardly reached 5% and faced the same tendency for never we see a slight drop from 5% to 4% and every day from 4 to 3%
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words week with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fast food consumption
  • Frequency
  • Dining trends
  • Demographic factors
  • Peak periods
  • Downward/upward trend
  • Lifestyle choices
  • Nutritional awareness
  • Economic impact
  • Health implications
  • Convenience foods
  • Eating habits
  • Statistical evidence
  • Year-over-year comparison
  • Fluctuation
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