You recently moved to a new house and you want to invite an old friend to stay with you. Write a letter to your friend. In you letter, - invite him to stay and suggest a date - briefly describe the new house and garden - say why you like your new house. You should write atleast 150 words. You do not need to write any addresses. Begin you letter as follows: Dear Jimmy,

Dear Paidemoyo I am writing
this
letter to invite you to my house that I moved into a few months ago.
This
coming week, starting from October 10 I have booked a full week off, so I am inviting you
along with
Carmen and Courtney for a stay. After I moved out, we did not have any chance to spend time together that’s why I planned
this
vacation at my home. To describe a little bit about my new place, it is 11 roomed house with 3 bedrooms beautifully designed kitchen. It has a garage and a big parking area in front of the house.
Also
, it has a lovely garden with a big water fountain and beautiful flowers planted by the landlord. The sunroof in my dining area to the kitchen brings a lot of sunlight during the day.
This
is the main reason that attracted me the most. Hope to see you soon. Tinotenda Amanda Potsekayi
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