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Some educationalists think that international exchange visits will benefit teenagers at the school. To what extent do the adventage outweigh the disadvantages?

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Most Instructors perceive that if
students
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 move to different
countries
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 for training or taking courses at their school, they will get an advantage in their studies
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 there are others who consider that
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 is not that beneficial for them.
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 is
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 a good perception in the case of beneficiaries. Different
countries
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 offer various opportunities for
students
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 to improve their knowledge. Some
countries
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 give improved laboratory facilities than others.
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, we can sometimes see that
countries
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 are supplying training programmes for several weeks to ensure a hands-on experience for the pupils. These training experiences and courses improve their ability to learn about their subjects substantially. Not only that, if
students
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 get the chance to visit another country, they will achieve the opportunity to get acquainted with various cultures. Interaction with different cultures will definitely help them to communicate with their fellow learners and understand their surrounding considerably.
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, the travel cost to visit another country sometimes gets heavier in their budget. If the authority concerned with the improvement of the learners takes the responsibility to bear the cost of travelling and other expenses,
students
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 will not think about their budget.
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 they will focus more on learning interesting things and always have a look out for the opportunity they can avail to broaden their perspective. In conclusion, the perception of the instructors regarding the travelling of the
students
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 is very advantageous for their school life. It will help them to grow up as an intellectual and mature person who has a better understanding of the environment encircling them.
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    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
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