Write a letter to a friend who you spent a weekend with helping to move and hosting a party. Include in your letter What you like most about the new apartment What you did over the weekend Where and when you would like to meet again

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Dear Tracy, Hope

this

letter finds you well. I am thankful for the help you gave me the day I was moving into my new apartment on Taomina Ave. At, first I was nervous about moving to a new place where there is new people around the

area

. But later

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I got used and the place isn't bad at all. The

area

has many elderly people, my neighbour brings me cookies every morning, she always

say

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that

thats

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that's

how we welcome new neighbours in

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the Taomina

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Taomina

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Taormina

area

. To be honest

this

is one of the best things in my

area

and I appreciate

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the kindness she gives.

Last

weekend I decided to visit the community shopping centre, it's a

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walk. I went to buy food and some medication. On my way back I saw a restaurant called Meat mart they served delicious food, I

orderd

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ordered

my food and went home. The day I got paid at work, I bought a PlayStation online and it arrived

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the next day. So I was

planing

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playing

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that

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the next weekend

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October 12, if you are not busy you can

tocome

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to come

come

help me install it and we could spend the weekend together if you don't mind. Many snacks will be severed. Hope to see you soon, Tino

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

217 words

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