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In their advertising businesses nowadays usually emphasize that their products are new in some way

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Compared with the past,
Due to
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 the number of
products
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 and the variety of the same
products
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 advertising methods have dramatically changed all over the world. These days,
companies
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 emphasize their
products
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 are new. In my opinion, the positive points of
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 method are more than the negative ones.
Firstly
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, the most successful key to advertising and making
people
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 buy is presenting new things
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 as presenting English class which is held by new methods of teaching or producing mobile phones which have a new feature that causes keeping a battery for three days. These days, not
also
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 we have many
products
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 but
also
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 many varieties of each product which means if a new
company
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 wants to enter a specific area
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 as personal computers and make a new product, many
companies
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 already did it.
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, if
people
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 want to buy a PC, they buy from a known
company
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such
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 as hp because these
companies
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 are old and
people
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 have trust. So, you have to compete with these old
companies
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, you don't have any option, except to produce new
products
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, methods, or features to make
people
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 know you and trust you and buy from your
company
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.
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, a
company
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 should create a need among
people
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, which means an advertiser is searching for what things are lacking in
people
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's lives and if
people
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 have it, their life is easier than before.
Therefore
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, a
company
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 has to create something new to show
people
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 that
this
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 product makes you comfortable, happy, and better life.
However
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, making a new idea and building
people
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's trust is difficult for a new
company
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.
For example
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, you want to open a new
company
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 which produces sports kits and you know many
companies
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 already did it. So you have to present something new
such
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 as the quality of the kits or the looks of the kits. In conclusion, making a new method is necessary to sell.
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