In today’s competitive world, many families find it necessary for both parents go out to work. While some say the children in these families benefit from the additional income, others feel they lack support because of their parents’ absence. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

There is no doubt that these days in

this

competitive world many families find they should both

parents

to go out to work. The question is, do

children

benefit from their

parent

's incomes or they will not find any support? In

this

essay, I am going to discuss both views and draw my own opinion. In terms of view, some people believe that

children

benefit from their

parent

's additional income. The main reason given to support

this

claim is that high income helps kids to take an education in elite schools and get the best education. To illustrate, when kids want to take a tutor for some lessons and pay for things to help them study so all

this

needs money for it.

In other words

, they will get high scores in school.

Also

In the

future

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they will get into the best college .

However

, other people think that the

children

will get lack support in their

parent

's absence.

Firstly

, kids will be lost without

parents

around them.

In other words

, their education level will drop and they can't choose their friend in a good way.

secondly

, they will always stay alone at home So, they will do anything they want without their

parents

looking after them.

This

is because they have no border for anything.

Also

, they may take illegal things home. That has a bad impact on their future. In conclusion,

although

children

benefit from their

parents

' salaries, they

also

need their

parents

to be around them.

Therefore

, I believe that it is not good for

children

by their

parent

's

absent

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.