Computer have changed the way people study. What are the advantages and disadvantages of using computers as study aids?

Nowadays, computers are becoming increasingly popular for study than before
due to
enhancement
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in technology. There are some pros and cons of using laptops for learning purposes. There are so many benefits of using the vast paced technology like computers to learn something new rather than using pen and paper.
One
of them is
time saving
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, the
one
can save
their
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time
while
studying online,
as
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in terms of
writing
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the writing
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test
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, a learner can do their task effectively by using
keyboard
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the keyboard
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which is
really
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useful form
of
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tool
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when writing rather than
traditional
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style of writing. Another
one
is having more interest during education with the aid of today's technology, as from books, students may not focus properly when they learn as compared to
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a laptop
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laptop
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laptops
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. Because these screens have more visual content
instead
of theoretical. The first drawback of sitting in front of these monitors is health issues. Since students use
this device
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these devices
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more often to fulfil their goals
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as a result
they forget to take breaks in between which
further
lead
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to many diseases
such
as obesity, loss of eyesight and many more which
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very dangerous for them in future. The second
one
is
lack
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of interaction between classmates, as they are not making more friends when they are completing their assignments.
As a result
, they feel alone, and they might go into depression in future. In conclusion, there are advantages and disadvantages of studying with the help of
computer
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but as everyone
know
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that studying from books is
also
a
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initiative step.
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