Some people believe that technology has made man more social. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Experts throughout both the developing and developed world have debated whether the advent of sophisticated modern automation

such

as mobile phones, laptops and iPad has helped to enhance and improve folk's social lives or whether the opposite has become the case. Personally, I strongly advocate the former view.

This

essay will discuss both sides using examples from the UK government and Oxford University to demonstrate points and prove arguments. On the one ,hand there is ample, powerful, almost daily evidence that

such

machinery can be detrimental ,especially to the younger generation who are more easily affected by its addictive nature and which can result in the public feeling more isolated from society. The central reason behind

this

is twofold,

firstly

, the invention of online social media sites and apps,

such

as Twitter and Facebook has reduced crucial face-to-face interactions dramatically. Through the use of these appealing and attractive mediums, the community feel in touch and connected yet lack key social skills and the ability to communicate.

Secondly

, dependence on

such

devices is built up frighteningly easily which may have a damaging effect on mental health and encourage a sedentary lifestyle.

For example

, recent scientific research by the UK government demonstrated that 90% of the crowd in their 30s spend over 20 hours per week on Messenger and similar applications to chat with their friends

instead

of meeting up and spending quality time together or doing sports.

As a result

, it is conclusively clear that these technological advancements have decreased and diminished our real-life interactions.

On the other hand

,

although

there are significant downsides to technological developments, its’ multifold advantages cannot be denied.

This

is

large

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because the popularity of machinery

such

as cell phones allows folk to connect freely and easily with no geographical barriers. families are able to share any type of news, information, photos and opinions with their loved ones whenever and wherever they want

therefore

keeping a feeling of proximity and closeness.

For example

, an extensive study by Oxford University illustrated that the population who work, or study abroad and use applications like Facetime and WhatsApp to chat with their families, are less likely to experience loneliness and feel out of the loop than those who do not. Consistent with

this

line of thinking is that businessmen are

also

undoubtedly able to benefit from these advances by holding virtual real-time meetings using Skype which may increase the chance of closing business deals without the need to fly. From the arguments and examples given I firmly believe that

overall

communication and man’s sociability has been advanced enormously

due to

huge the huge technological progress of the past twenty years and despite some potentially serious health implications which governments should not fail to address, it is predicted that its popularity will continue to flourish in the future.