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The diagram shows the main systems of writing used throughout the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.

The diagram shows the main systems of writing used throughout the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.
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The diagram below gives information about the main systems of typing used worldwide. The first
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 is “logographic” where,
one
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character
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 equals
one
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 word,
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, the Chinese language uses
this
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system
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.
However
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, the same writing
system
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 can be used by languages different in spoken form.
For example
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, Chinese and Japanese. the Second
one
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 is “Adjab”, where,
one
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character
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 is
one
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 consonant sound.
This
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 is the first type of sound-based writing
system
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. The Arabic language uses
this
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system
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. The third
system
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 is “Adjuda” where
one
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character
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 is the association of
one
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 consonant and
one
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 vowel. Indian Devanagari uses
this
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system
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. The fourth is the “Alphabetic”
system
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, where
one
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character
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 is a sound.
This
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 sound can be a vowel or consonant.
Therefore
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, exact matching of spelling and pronunciation is not always possible. The English language uses
this
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system
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. The fifth
one
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 is the “syllabic” writing
system
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 where
one
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character
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 is
one
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 syllable. Japanese Kana uses
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 type of writing
system
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.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "for example".
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Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Basic structure: Add more body paragraphs.
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words system, one, character with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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