some people believe that teachers should be friendly and other people think that teacher should be very bad. do you agree or disagree

These days more fathers stay at home and take care of their

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mothers go out to

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. What could be the reasons for

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? Do you think it is a positive or

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negative development? It is true that more

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are prioritizing their jobs over doing traditional

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nowadays.

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it is beneficial for

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, I still believe that there are more drawbacks. First of all, the reason why there are more

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choosing to

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instead

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of doing

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is that

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have been better educated in schools than ever before. It brings them to acquire so many

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experiences for their career path and have been given equal opportunities as

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in many fields.

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, in the traditional way of thinking, astronauts, construction workers, and even the president of countries are all

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's priorities, it is now open and

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get the same right to choose because of the improvement of education.

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are more well-educated in schools, workplaces, and a variety of different aspects than before.

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, they are more willing to invest their own time in developing their professional careers than taking care of families. Second of all,

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can have more beneficiaries because they have more opportunities to earn money. Earning money gives financial support for

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to support their expenses without relying on their families or husbands. It is more convenient for

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to be financial independence. As the result,

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will have more chances to make their own decisions about whether stay at home or choose to go out for

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.

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,

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’s social status will be increasingly raised if they continually put efforts into working. It gets gradually improved when the female group is highly engaged in the business

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and they are being traded equally like

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in different aspects of life, it will definitely bring lots of fames and reputations for increasing the

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' social status.

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, a healthy family should contain both

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's and

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's roles to take responsibility as parents, I believe that a long time of fatherhood will bring some negative effects on the development of childhood. If only the

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accompany the

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,

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, the parents and

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’s relationship will keep unbalanced, and it probably would lead to an absence of emotion in

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when they growing up.

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, even if

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are taking more

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, they can never become the best choice for early childhood as they are more easily to lose patients and is not very careful in taking concentrating on detail as

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. If the

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keep asking questions or being out of control of their actions, the fathers may get pissed off and yell at their kids. As the consequence, it can be affected the

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’s well-being and characteristics in the future. More importantly, being a long-term accompany with the fatherhood journey, it gives

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a lack of character shaping in many ways when they growing.

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, males are usually strong, tough, and aggressive characteristics in dealing with problems, which gets

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too easy to get angry and easily violent when they grow up in a family without giving too much love and patience from their mother's side.

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, it brings negative impacts on the family

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female roles are being absent and paying too much attention to

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. In conclusion,

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it has become more popular for people to encourage males to take more responsibilities to stay with family and take care of

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, it has brought about more problems for

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to be considered a positive trend.