The pie charts show professions chosen by female graduates of a certain university. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting in the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The pie charts show professions chosen by female graduates of a certain university.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting in the main features and make comparisons where relevant
The given two pie charts illustrate the percentages of women alumni from Aberforth University between 1990 and 2015 in five categories major.
Overall
, it can be seen that Education has the biggest portion in the earliest time. Meanwhile, in 2015 the proportion of Education was the same as in Medicine.
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amount in the 1990 era. The quantity of Education was about 40%, which
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decreased significantly and became 25%
at the end
of the initial year. Trailed by the Arts accounted for about 25% and steadily decrease
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15%.
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, Medicine
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increased
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5% from the first position turned to 25%.
On the other hand
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the beginning of
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the categories were much smaller
such
as Management and Engineering
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accounted
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% and 5% respectively. Meanwhile, in the
last
2015 Management and Engineering
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increased
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20% and 15% each. The percentage of Engineering was equivalent
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The arts.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • proportion
  • sector
  • reflecting
  • inclination
  • presence
  • notable
  • participation
  • disparities
  • dominated
  • ongoing
  • involvement
  • caregiving
  • liberal arts
  • creative
  • traditional roles
  • leadership positions
  • graduation
  • moderate
  • not overwhelming
  • presence
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