Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
In
this
modern era, many people including children
spend time with their smartphones
. Some people argue that it is happening because children
today need that technology to support their daily activities such
as school or for entertainment. Others argue that children
should not be provided with smartphones
because it can give more negativity. This
essay will discuss why children
spend more time with smartphones
rather than doing other activities, and this
essay will discuss whether it is positive or negative for them.
First,
many young generations today tend to spend more duration with gadgets because it is something that they cannot avoid. For example
, many schools present-day have been changing their way of delivering school materials to students from paper-based to online material. In this
case, children
do not have a choice to not use their gadgets to access the material provided by their teacher. Furthermore
, parents cannot forbid their children
because it can reduce their children
’s performance at school.
Another reason is the way youngsters spend their free time for entertain themselves has changed compared to the past. Today, most children
tend to play online games rather than play outside because it will be easy for them to meet their relatives or even new friends via online games. For example
, one famous game is a mobile legend where children
can easy to play and get new friends randomly all around the world. In this
case, by meeting strangers from foreign countries, they can easily improve their ability to speak using an international language such
as English.
In conclusion, I believe that spending a whole day on gadgets is something that they cannot avoid, especially in this
era which is dominated by technology. This
improvement can bring positive effects if children
use that tools wisely. If some parents may be afraid that their children
can access other content that is
harmful to them easily, parents should have strict rules that apply to their children
such
as controlling the schedule or even installing some applications that can connect to parents’ smartphones
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