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Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company. In your letter: -describe the item you lost -explain how you lost it -tell the insurance company what you would like them to do.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
this
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 letter to inform you that I lost my wedding ring during my vacation. My wedding band is made of 10 ct diamond in silver colour and it was bought two months ago. My husband and I went on a trip to Lisbon
last
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 week and I lost my ring at Alfama beach. After swimming in the sea, I fall asleep for a couple of minutes.
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, I realized that I lost my ring when I woke up from my nap at the beach. Since I'm sure that I was wearing my band on my finger when I back to the beach, I guess that it was stolen during my nap.
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, there were so many people in the place at that time, it was not difficult to pick up my belongings.
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 the contract, it is guaranteed by your service in the situation that I buy it using an Amex card.
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, It is still under the insurance period.
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, please check the detail of my purchase and compensate me for the same price of the diamond that I lost. I attach the invoice for it. I would be grateful if you could respond to me as soon as possible. Faithfully yours, Ayaka Hioki
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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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