WRITING TASK I You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The charts below show the results of a survey of adult education. The first chart shows the reasons why adults decide to study. The pie chart shows how people think the costs of adult education should be shared. Write a report for a university lecturer, describing the information shown below. You should write at least 150 words.
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The chart and pie chart below, contain information on the purpose of the study among
adults
, and their opinions on how the wage for each course should be split.
Taking a look at the table below, it’s obvious that about 40% of adult students are studying because they are interested in the course which they are studying , followed closely by 30% of adults
enrolling in education for the goal of gaining a specific qualification in that area. The remaining fourth the adults
are learning a major,
because 22% of them believe it will guide them in the job they are currently working.
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people
are cultivating, in order to gain their chances of getting promoted in their working company or industry. One-fifth of adults
enrolled in a study program,
because they simply enjoy learning about the major they have taken part in. 12% of Remove the comma
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adults
demand to change their job in the future, as a result
, they are educating themselves, therefore
switching jobs. The least common reasoning as to why adults
are educated,
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people
, with an approximate rate of 9% of adult students.
The pie chart given here,
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people
think that the fees of each course need to be separated. From their point of view, individuals have to pay 40% of the cost, which is most of the costs, employers must pay 35% of the payment, and taxpayers need to pay 25% of the tuition fees.
In conclusion, as the provided information says, most people
are studying, mainly because they are interested in their program and from people
’s view, individuals should cover most of the costs of the courses.Submitted by foad.marashi on
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