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WRITING TASK I The charts below show the results of a survey of adult education. The first chart shows the reasons why adults decide to study. The pie chart shows how people think the costs of adult education should be shared. Write a report for a university lecturer, describing the information shown below.

WRITING TASK I The charts below show the results of a survey of adult education. The first chart shows the reasons why adults decide to study. The pie chart shows how people think the costs of adult education should be shared. Write a report for a university lecturer, describing the information shown below.
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The chart and pie chart below, contain information on the purpose of the study among
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, and their opinions on how the wage for each course should be split. Taking a look at the table below, it’s obvious that about 40% of adult students are studying because they are interested in the course which they are studying , followed closely by 30% of
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 enrolling in education for the goal of gaining a specific qualification in that area. The remaining fourth the
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 are learning a major
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 because 22% of them believe it will guide them in the job they are currently working. 20% of
people
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 are cultivating, in order to gain their chances of getting promoted in their working company or industry. One-fifth of
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 enrolled in a study program
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 because they simply enjoy learning about the major they have taken part in. 12% of
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 demand to change their job in the future,
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, they are educating themselves,
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 switching jobs. The least common reasoning as to why
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 are educated
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 is to greet and interact with other
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, with an approximate rate of 9% of adult students. The pie chart given here
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 represents details about how
people
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 think that the fees of each course need to be separated. From their point of view, individuals have to pay 40% of the cost, which is most of the costs, employers must pay 35% of the payment, and taxpayers need to pay 25% of the tuition fees. In conclusion, as the provided information says, most
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 are studying, mainly because they are interested in their program and from
people
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’s view, individuals should cover most of the costs of the courses.
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Contractions: Don't use contractions.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words adults, people with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
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