The charts show the sale of five different kinds of jam from 2009 to 2014.

The charts show the sale of five different kinds of jam from 2009 to 2014.
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The chart compares the
sales
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of various types of jam between 2009 and 2014.
Overall
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, the
sales
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of strawberries overstepped the others in 2005 and
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in 2014.
However
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, the selling of plums saw a remarkable fall in 2014. Looking into more details, the
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of strawberries started at almost 3.1 in 2005
then
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it increased gradually at a greater rate through the years until it reached 6 in 2014.
This
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is followed by the
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of Raspberries and plums, both were approximately 2.6 in 2005. The former grew slightly and Notably until 2012 accounting for 4.3, after ,that it remained steady until 2014.
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, the latter decreased significantly through the years to become null in 2014. The
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of cherries fluctuated until 2012, and after ,that they persisted constantly until 2014.
Lastly
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, the
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of grapes started at 0,5 in 2005 and saw a dramatic surge accounting for 3,8 in 2014 overtaking the
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of cherries and becoming the third most profitable sale in 2014.
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