The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of energy in USA since 1980 with projections until 2030. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The line graph illustrates
,
the utilisation of energy in the Remove the comma
apply
year
1980 to the future
year
2030 in the USA. As per the 2008 report.
Overall
, petrol, coal and Oil is
gradually increasing throughout the years Change the verb form
are
while
natural gas
has some ups and downs in the period of 1980 to 2030. However
, the history and projection of energies such
as Nuclear solar and wind Hydropower doesn't
have any growth in the past and Change the verb form
don't
future
. The utilization
of energy is mentioned in Quadrillion units.
To begin
with petrol and oil, in 1980, 35% of energy utilization
was showing. There was a slight decrease in 1985 about 5% less consumption and it came back to in
35% in the Change preposition
apply
year
1990. Then
there is a slow increase from 2000 and in the ,
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apply
future
the utilization
reach 50% in the year
2030. Likewise
coal and natural gas
as a slow pace increase. They start with 15% of coal and 20% of natural gas
in the year
1980. Several Ups and downs were in the years 1985 to 2015. From 2015 onwards natural gas
was a constant percentage till 2030. But in the case of coal, it is increasing and expected to reach 30% in 2030.
Subsequently
, Nuclear solar and wind hydropower have similar utilization
from the beginning to the future
years. This
energies
Fix the agreement mistake
energy
starts
with below 5% and in Change the verb form
start
future
prediction is to reach Correct your spelling
maximum of
maximum
Correct article usage
a maximumof
maximumof
6%Correct your spelling
maximum of
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