The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of energy in USA since 1980 with projections until 2030. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of energy in USA since 1980 with projections until 2030.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The line graph illustrates
,
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the utilisation of energy in the
year
1980 to the
future
year
2030 in the USA. As per the 2008 report.
Overall
, petrol, coal and Oil
is
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gradually increasing throughout the years
while
natural
gas
has some ups and downs in the period of 1980 to 2030.
However
, the history and projection of energies
such
as Nuclear solar and wind Hydropower
doesn't
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have any growth in the past and
future
. The
utilization
of energy is mentioned in Quadrillion units.
To begin
with petrol and oil, in 1980, 35% of energy
utilization
was showing. There was a slight decrease in 1985 about 5% less consumption and it came back to
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35% in the
year
1990.
Then
there is a slow increase from 2000 and in the
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future
the
utilization
reach 50% in the
year
2030.
Likewise
coal and natural
gas
as a slow pace increase. They start with 15% of coal and 20% of natural
gas
in the
year
1980. Several Ups and downs were in the years 1985 to 2015. From 2015 onwards natural
gas
was a constant percentage till 2030. But in the case of coal, it is increasing and expected to reach 30% in 2030.
Subsequently
, Nuclear solar and wind hydropower have similar
utilization
from the beginning to the
future
years.
This
energies
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starts
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with below 5% and in
future
prediction is to reach
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maximum of
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Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slow" was used 2 times.

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  • energy consumption
  • projections
  • renewable energy
  • non-renewable resources
  • sustainable
  • fossil fuels
  • nuclear energy
  • biofuels
  • hydroelectric power
  • solar energy
  • wind energy
  • trends
  • increases/decreases
  • shifts
  • milestones
  • significant
  • forecast
  • implications
  • sustainable development
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