The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of energy in USA since 1980 with projections until 2030. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

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the utilisation of energy in the

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1980 to the

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2030 in the USA. As per the 2008 report.

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, petrol, coal and Oil

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gradually increasing throughout the years

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natural

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has some ups and downs in the period of 1980 to 2030.

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, the history and projection of energies

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have any growth in the past and

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. The

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of energy is mentioned in Quadrillion units.

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with petrol and oil, in 1980, 35% of energy

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was showing. There was a slight decrease in 1985 about 5% less consumption and it came back to

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35% in the

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1990.

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there is a slow increase from 2000 and in the

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the

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reach 50% in the

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2030.

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coal and natural

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as a slow pace increase. They start with 15% of coal and 20% of natural

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in the

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1980. Several Ups and downs were in the years 1985 to 2015. From 2015 onwards natural

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was a constant percentage till 2030. But in the case of coal, it is increasing and expected to reach 30% in 2030.

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from the beginning to the

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years.

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starts

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with below 5% and in

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prediction is to reach

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