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Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Dicuss both the views and give your own opinion.

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In the modern world, we have much
information
 to find
for example
 scientific
research
 and business and the academic world and
also
 it is very easy to search.
Therefore
, someone thinks that it is very beneficial to share for free but someone has a different opinion because they think that too valuable to share for free.
Also
, I totally agree that sharing
information
 for free is will be great and
this
 essay will write about my opinion. The first idea that comes to mind is
research
information
 is very important for everyone.
Second,
free
information
 can help each other.
Such
 as they can help many students or many
research
 to find out the data.
Also
, it is can help them to find answers.
Moreover
, they can have the results from their
research
 which mean that free
information
 can help the world change. One viewpoint considers that some people believe that knowledge can not be for free because they think that there spent a long time to search answers and results.
In addition
, they think that there pay a lot of money for projects.The obvious consequence of
this
 problem is that the researcher will sell expensive
information
 on their project so, it is a very bad situation for us which means sometimes someone does not want to search for new ideas because of the cost.
To sum up
, I believe that free
information
 is better than not free because we have the most valuable ex-
information
 or data.
Also
, the
information
 can change every time so, give free
information
 can find new answers.
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