Environmental problems such as pollution and climatic variations are increasing nowadays. The government have taken some measures at the global level. Birthday God only few solutions. Why is it so? How can this problem be solved?

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are increasing,
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air, and global warming.It was
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that, factory smoke is
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as a
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governments should regulate some
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rules
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, the
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cause
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should
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overusing cars is
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that
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atmospher
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atmosphere
. because, cars contain greenhouse gases that cause climate change,and damage health,
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people
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do not mind, and they keep using
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one
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causes
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polluted temperature, and plant,
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because
in factories, toxic materials and gas, like carbon dioxide, and methane, are
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burnt
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issue,
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to
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change their habits. It is often argued,
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variety
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solutions
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governments
should impose fines, for
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factories
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, the poison that they cause can
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decrease
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, awareness can be spread, by
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organizing
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campaigns
, and constructing bill
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board
on streets, about how
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pollution
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be reduced ,
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be solved, by changing some habits. Governments are
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administrators
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