Some believe that people are naturally born leaders while others feel that leadership skills can develop. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Many today have come to the conclusion that
leadership
talent is innate, rather than cultivated through time and experience. In my point of view, I believe that
leadership
skills
can be learned through hard
practicing
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and training. The salient argument is that there are
naturally
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born leaders who point out
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character of a person is a fixed quantity. A good example is Barack Obama who has a lot of good qualities
such
as an eloquent, stately, physically imposing presence and perfectly walks in a line between warmth and firmness. Researchers have long identified common natural characteristics of
leadership
such
as height, a deep voice, a strong chin and natural grace of movement. These can not be developed to a significant degree and
therefore
support the claim that
leadership
is intrinsic.
However
, great
leadership
is more deliberate than spontaneous. Almost of good leaders experienced a long time of training and
practicing
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. They need to improve their soft
skills
such
as communication
skills
, management
skills
, solving problems
skills
,.. Or challenge themselves
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some field
skills
.
For example
, if you want to lead an accounting team, you need to know a large amount of accounting knowledge and some
skills
related to solving problems in the field. In conclusion, though the endpoint may obscure the origins, all leaders should accumulate more knowledge, especially in their field, and
also
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more soft
skills
in order to lead and guide people in the right way. From that, a good leader will make a better future and create more jobs for
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market.
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