You have recently started working in a new company. write a letter to your friend. In your letter Explain why you changed job discribe your new job tell him/her about other news

Dear Anna,

Although

such

a short time since we saw each other, it feels much longer. I hope everything is going well for you. I have changed my job as a primary school teacher. It's been a long time since I wanted to change my career but my personal commitments are always made a barrier for me to choosing my dream life. ,

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I thought it was a suitable time to move to my dream job. Teaching is not only a job it's

also

a passion for me. I can't express my happiness as a teacher and how much I am enjoying my new career. I am working in our old school. Do you remember David, our schoolmate, he is working with me.You should come over and stay with me. Let me know what you are thinking. With love, Jennifer.

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I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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7 paragraphs

140 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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You have recently started working in a new company. write a letter to your friend. In your letter Explain why you changed job discribe your new job tell him/her about other news

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

When new towns are planned, it is important to build more public parks or sports facilities than shopping centers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

your neighbours have recently written to you to you about the noise from your houseflat. Write a letter to your neighbours, in your letter: - explain a reason for the noise - apologise - describe what actions will you take

Some people believe that non-academic subjects at school should be removed from the syllabus so that children can concentrate wholly on academic subjects. To what extent do you agree or disagree?