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The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie charts illustrate that Australia's domestic usage of
energy
 and the percentage of green
gas
 emissions occur
due to
this
energy
 consumption.
Overall
, heating and water heating are the most significant
energy
 consumer,
while
 cooling is the smallest figure. In comparison, other appliances and water heating are responsible for the large green
gas
 emission and the lowest percentage made by cooling. Lighting and refrigerators and other appliances are accounts for 4%, 7% and 15% respectively of use in
energy
 and it is double their values when green
gas
 emissions. It's about 8%,14% and 28%.
Furthermore
, cooling and water heating require
energy
 at about 2% and 30% respectively and these figures released green
gas
 slightly increase than consume. Heating is the largest
energy
 user in the Australian domestic environment and it is 42%.
However
,
according to
 the
energy
 usage of heating and green
gas
 emission almost half of
proportion
Add an article
the proportion
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. It is made up of 15%.
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