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the world of work is changing rapidly and people cannot depend on the same job or the same condition of work for life.discuss the causes and give your suggestions on how people should prepare for workin the future

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Despite the improvement in
job
 conditions, working hours and
business
 environment, the definition of
work
 and its shape changed quickly. Recently most authors believe people are not influenced by their same
work
 or the features of
work
.
This
 essay will discuss the causes of
this
 problem and available solutions for it. The two main causes of altering
work
 and its condition are massive development in artificial intelligence (AI) and remote working which are dominating the
business
 sector recently.
First,
AI is
a
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common sense for workplaces which is completing activities or tasks with algorithms.
Thus
, lots of companies give an
opportunity
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 for machines and software than other people.
For instance
, the famous streaming service Netflix uses artificial intelligence for developing users' interfaces, preferences for movies and choices.
Second,
distant working is changing the understanding of jobs and offices.
For example
, some software engineers start working
home
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 offices during the pandemic and other companies follow
this
 trend rapidly.
Although
 the effect of AI and distant working
are
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 changing the model of
business
, employees may adapt to
this
 system easily. In my opinion, the integration of personal skills can lead to different
job
 modalities in close future. People who consider their
job
 as office
work
,
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 may adapt their jobs to the remote working modal. It will assist in both developing refreshed working conditions and altering old fashion
job
 understanding.
To conclude
, there are many challenges for
the
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new
business
work
such
 as the integration of artificial intelligence and remote working. Adapting jobs and integration with AI will be possible solutions for these challenges.
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