some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.
Nowadays, more than
million
tons of Correct article usage
a million
wastes
have been being produced Fix the agreement mistake
waste
which
from home Correct pronoun usage
apply
everyday
and some people claim that not enough of the Replace the word
every day
litters
is recycled. Fix the agreement mistake
litter
Therefore
, they think the governments should have a
policy to increase recycling.
It is necessary to say that their governments should take action. Change the article
the
For example
, providing rubbish bag
Fix the agreement mistake
bags
into
each family so that separate Change preposition
to
a
litter and make it to have value. Many Correct article usage
apply
waste
; Change to a plural noun
wastes
paper
, Change preposition
of paper
box
or steel from home can sale to governments or Fix the agreement mistake
boxes
decrease
council tax. Either, the Wrong verb form
decreased
government
should provide junk
Correct article usage
a junk
bank
Fix the agreement mistake
banks
that
the citizen can deposit recycled Correct pronoun usage
apply
waste
and inverse to be
some money.
Unnecessary verb
apply
Moreover
, the government
should have spot advertisement
on television to motivate Fix the agreement mistake
advertisements
advantages
of recycling. In Thailand, my country, we have Correct article usage
the advantages
"'
R" advertisement standing For reuse, reduce and recycle Correct article usage
an "'
and
easy example Correct word choice
apply
way
to do Change preposition
of way
in
Correct your spelling
it
house
Add an article
the house
a house
such
as using less
plastics bag (reduce), reuse take away Change the quantifier
fewer
box
or Fix the agreement mistake
boxes
sale
some paper.
In Replace the word
sell
school
teacher
teach children how to recycle Fix the agreement mistake
teachers
waste
at home and go back to tell their parent
and come back to report their teacher. There is one day a week in order that clean Fix the agreement mistake
parents
school
together which help Correct article usage
the school
they
have a good attitude in cleaning.
In conclusion, it should be good that the Correct pronoun usage
them
government
make some law
about Fix the agreement mistake
laws
waste
tax and make people follow the law by give
them back some money. Change the verb form
giving
Starting
give education at Add the particle
toStarting
school
so that when they growth
up Replace the word
grow
the
will do easier.
In my opinion, it is very easy Correct your spelling
they
to
Change preposition
for
government
to do as I mention
above to reduce Change the form of the verb
mentioned
waste
from homes such
as "3R", junk bank
, providing rubbish bins and teaching at Fix the agreement mistake
banks
school
and It will be a good habit and good in long
term.Add an article
the long
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