some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

Nowadays, more than
million
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tons of
wastes
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waste
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have been being produced
which
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apply
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from home
everyday
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every day
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and some people claim that not enough of the
litters
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litter
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is recycled.
Therefore
, they think the governments should have
a
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the
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policy to increase recycling. It is necessary to say that their governments should take action.
For example
, providing rubbish
bag
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bags
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into
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to
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each family so that separate
a
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apply
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litter and make it to have value. Many
waste
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wastes
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;
paper
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of paper
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,
box
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boxes
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or steel from home can sale to governments or
decrease
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decreased
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council tax. Either, the
government
should provide
junk
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a junk
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bank
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banks
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that
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apply
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the citizen can deposit recycled
waste
and inverse to
be
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apply
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some money.
Moreover
, the
government
should have spot
advertisement
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advertisements
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on television to motivate
advantages
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the advantages
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of recycling. In Thailand, my country, we have
"'
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an "'
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R" advertisement standing For reuse, reduce and recycle
and
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apply
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easy example
way
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of way
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to do
in
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it
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house
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the house
a house
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such
as using
less
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fewer
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plastics bag (reduce), reuse take away
box
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boxes
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or
sale
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sell
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some paper. In
school
teacher
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teachers
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teach children how to recycle
waste
at home and go back to tell their
parent
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parents
show examples
and come back to report their teacher. There is one day a week in order that clean
school
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the school
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together which help
they
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them
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have a good attitude in cleaning. In conclusion, it should be good that the
government
make some
law
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laws
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about
waste
tax and make people follow the law by
give
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giving
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them back some money.
Starting
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toStarting
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give education at
school
so that when they
growth
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grow
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up
the
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they
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will do easier. In my opinion, it is very easy
to
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for
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government
to do as I
mention
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mentioned
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above to reduce
waste
from homes
such
as "3R", junk
bank
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banks
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, providing rubbish bins and teaching at
school
and It will be a good habit and good in
long
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the long
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term.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Waste management
  • Recycling
  • Sustainability
  • Mandatory
  • Voluntary
  • Legislative measures
  • Environmental impact
  • Public awareness
  • Regulation
  • Sanctions
  • Compliance
  • Recycling facilities
  • Consumer behavior
  • Waste reduction
  • Resource conservation
  • Circular economy
  • Eco-friendly
  • Biodegradable
  • Landfill
  • Global initiative
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