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Look at the diagram about the metamorphosis of a frog. (Metamorphosis is the process by which an animal changes its form as it matures)

The diagram illustrates the life cycle process of how a
frog
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 changes its morphological features as it matures. In general, there are five stages in the metamorphosis cycle experienced by a
frog
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. In the process, its stages are categorized into their habitat, in the water and in the land, respectively. The initial stage of
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 development takes place in the water.
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, an adult female
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 produces white
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 masses with each of them containing a black nucleus in the middle. They are joined together and laid in the water. After that, each of the
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 masses transforms into tadpoles that are significantly different from the previous stage shape. A tadpole is larger than its
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 form, has a grey all over its body, and it has a tail in the posterior. The next stage is when the tadpole grows two legs below its body. The next phase is when all forms started to have the ability to live in the terrestrial areas. Before becoming an adult
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that is
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 ready to reproduce the next
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 mass, the tadpoles with legs alters their morphological feature into
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a young
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frog
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 that has four legs. It still has the tail, after which it is diminished.

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