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Some individuals think that exploring space is a waste of money, what is your opinion?

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The idea of exploring
space
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 become controversial over the years with many
people
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 believing that spending
money
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 in
space
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 is more challenging than the advantages. I believe government should spend on other facilities and In
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 essay, I would explain both views. There are several reasons why it should stop.
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, From an economic perspective, there will be a loss of huge amount of
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 if mission would be failed.
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:For making satellites, rocket they had been spending billions of cash.
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, it won't beneficial to the normal public it's only for political parties to show up power toward other countries.
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, Hundred of
people
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 lose their lives in every mission.
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: Article published in Kathmandu public ( national new paper of Nepal ) more than 20
people
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 lost their life in
space
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 till 2020.
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, many scientists are getting jobs through
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 mission and investigate new things in every missions.
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;Scientific had find out the many other planets and there environment condition which will helpful to us in coming future. I believe that the
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 home from
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 programs should go to vital Heitel public service because now
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 mini public, who are losing their life daily
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 the lack of health facilities and shortage of food.
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: During covid 19 many
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 loss there life
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 shortage of health survive. In conclusion, as
space
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 explore had some prons but there are more cons so government should spend
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 in other common facilities rather than in
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