The charts show the sale of five different kinds of jam from 2009 to 2014. The charts show the sale of five different kinds of jam from 2009 to 2014.

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of five various types of jams between 2009 to 2014.

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, the

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of strawberry and grape

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showed significant growth over the

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,

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raspberry and cherry experienced a downward trend.

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, plum

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sales

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declined gradually and it was not made any

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in 2014. In 2005 strawberry

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made the highest

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in the market were 3.1 and it showed

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substantial growth in the entire

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to 7,

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grape

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was nearly 0.5 at the beginning of the

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and it gradually rose

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to about 4.5 in 2014.

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,

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of plum

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begins at around 2.5 and dropped by zero

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of the 9 years. In early 2005 purchasing rates of cherry and raspberry were made about 1.8 and 2.8 respectively.

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, both figures increased

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rate but the cherry dropped in 2011 at 2 and next year it rose to 3. Again,

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was reduced the rate to 2.8 in 2014.

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, raspberry

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exceeded

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of strawberry

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in 2012 but it remained steady

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of the

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.