The charts show the sale of five different kinds of jam from 2009 to 2014. The charts show the sale of five different kinds of jam from 2009 to 2014.

The line graph illustrates the

sales

of five various types of jams between 2009 to 2014.

Overall

, the

sales

of strawberry and grape

jam

showed significant growth over the

period

,

while

raspberry and cherry experienced a downward trend.

However

, plum

jam

sales

declined gradually and it was not made any

sales

in 2014. In 2005 strawberry

jam

made the highest

sales

in the market were 3.1 and it showed

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substantial growth in the entire

period

to 7,

while

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grape

jam

was nearly 0.5 at the beginning of the

period

and it gradually rose

sales

to about 4.5 in 2014.

Nevertheless

,

sales

of plum

jam

begins at around 2.5 and dropped by zero

at the end

of the 9 years. In early 2005 purchasing rates of cherry and raspberry were made about 1.8 and 2.8 respectively.

Then

, both figures increased

sales

rate but the cherry dropped in 2011 at 2 and next year it rose to 3. Again,

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was reduced the rate to 2.8 in 2014.

Furthermore

, raspberry

jam

exceeded

sales

of strawberry

jam

in 2012 but it remained steady

at the end

of the

period

.