Fossil fuel is the main source of energy. In some countries the use of alternative source of energy is encouraged . To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement . It is a positive or negative development .

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Nowadays many
people
reason about how to educate their
children
in the right way:
while
some
people
believe that formal studying should start at a very young
age
, others claim that there is no necessity to force
children
to study before the
age
of 7. I strongly consider that it is better to give
children
freedom in their
childhood
and delay intensive studying for a few years when they will be more conscious and responsible. On the one hand, formal education plays a vital role in the formation of a child’s consciousness, and the earlier kid begins studying, the more his or her brain will be predisposed to discipline and assimilation of new knowledge. It is known that the child's brain is able to assimilate new information more easily, and it is why some
people
,
for example
, try to teach their
children
a few languages since infancy.
As a result
, indeed,
children
grow up bilinguals and are able to speak several languages, which simplifies their life in the future.
However
,
this
applies to native knowledge, but formal education requires more responsibility and discipline.
That is
why
people
believe that
children
at
this
age
need to discover the world, not textbooks. Being a toddler is the most carefree time of life so it is better to give a child an opportunity to experience the world without any responsibilities through games, walks and communication.
For example
, the best memories from
childhood
are always related to some curious games or impressions from first events like swimming, snowfall or Christmas holidays. None of us is pleased to remember how multiplication table was learned. In conclusion, learning from an early
age
forms in a child
such
necessary qualities as responsibility and discipline, but
children
will always have time to learn it, but
childhood
memories will remain with them for life.
That is
why I believe that it is necessary to give
children
the opportunity to postpone their studies to a generally accepted
age
and let them enjoy their
childhood
.
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