Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

Nowadays, many kids waste

times

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on their smartphones in their daily regime.

This

phenomenon

not

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only because of

addicted

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to

games

but

also

social

media

. I do believe that

this

problem might lead to

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impact

to

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children

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future.

Children

spend more hours

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a day on smartphones because they are addicted to several apps

such

as

games

and social

media

. Playing

games

on

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a smartphone

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smartphone

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smartphones

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for kids is an enjoyable activity since

smartphone

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smartphones

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can provide colourful pictures, dramatic back sounds and fascinating animations. All of them can attract

children

to play the

games

frequently.

Moreover

, the rank and level of

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the game

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make them want to continue the game until the highest level. Regarding social

media

,

youth

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generation

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to scroll on it again and again because

their

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curiousities

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curiosities

of

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other people’s

live

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about what they do, what they wear and what they eat.

For example

, many

children

follow their idols

in

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on

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instagram

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to know every single photo that their idols upload.

This

phenomenon might have domino effects

in

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the

children

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future.

The

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children

who like to spend their daily life on

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a smartphone

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smartphone

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smartphones

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are prone to not

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with their friends often.

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, they might lack

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their

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communication skill.

Then

in the following years, by lacking

of

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this

skill, the

children

will encounter many problems in their job.

To sum up

,

games

and social

media

will make

children

addicted to

smartphone

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and

this

problem lead to

negative

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a negative

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impact on their future.