To be labelled a ‘Work of Art’, a painting, sculpture or other art form should display certain qualities that are unique. However, over the past century there has been a decline in the quality of prize-winning artwork and it is now possible for quite ordinary pieces of art to be labelled ‘masterpieces ’ while true work of art pass unnoticed. Do you agree or disagree?

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Work

art

' our mind goes

immediatly

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immediately

to great masterpieces like

the

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one

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of Michelangelo, Leonardo, Picasso ecc, those pieces had always

unique

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qualities, and their value

nowdays

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unreacheble

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unreachable

, but with

the

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time

this

has changed, in the modern

art

it seems that the idea is more important

then

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the content. We can find

mocolour

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colour

paintings,

geometrical

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sculptures as masterpieces with

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monumental value,

this

is kind of shocking comparing the old

art

school to the new one, but

everthing

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everything

evolves and we have to consider that we are living in the internet and social media era,

this

affect

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the way the artist

relate

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to their

work

. I honestly

belive

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believe

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that

art

, there is

not

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ordinary pieces or true

work

art

, there are different ideas and different ways to say

somthing

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something

doing

art

, and every artist use their tools to make their

work

unique and personal. I

also

think

that is

important always to take

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consideration how much

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art

has changed since the first humans were paintings in

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caves until now, that

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us understand why

the

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modern

art

is so different, and the

reson

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reason

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humanity and the way the people live and think is simply changed and

art

changed with it.

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what I personally don't like is that there is

division

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between 'masterpieces' and ordinary pieces of

art

while

all of them would have to be

consider

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as an

espression

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expression

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thought, like a magnificent on

this

world, a way to filter what we see and what we could see.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

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Introduction & conclusion present

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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over-commercialization
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digital art
new media
societal values
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curators
nostalgia
romanticism
superficiality
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