The pie chart illustrates several types of careers that Anthropology students did after they graduated from a university while. Tthe table gives the information about their salaries following five years of working in their own field.
The diagram demonstrates the various steps involved in the production of orange
juice
, which commences with the gathering of fresh oranges and culminates in the distribution of packaged juice
to retail stores.
To begin
with, freshly picked oranges are gathered and transported on trucks to a processing plant, where they undergo a thorough washing process using a machine. After that, a squeezing machine is employed to extract juice
from the oranges, and the leftover solid waste comprising of
seeds and peels is collected and utilized for animal feed. The squeezed Change preposition
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juice
can then
be packaged and sent to supermarkets, or sent to a different facility for an evaporation process.
In the evaporation process, the freshly squeezed orange juice
is processed by an evaporator machine, which eliminates the water content. The concentrated juice
is then
canned, moved to a warehouse, and later combined with water. Finally
, it is packaged and distributed to supermarkets, where it is available for purchase.Submitted by luudang97 on
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