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parents should spend more time with their children by helping them doing their assignment. agree or disagree?

#parents #time #children #assignment
There is no doubt these days children have a lot of homework to do and need parents' help to handle that. The question is what amount of time should people spend assisting their kids with the writing task
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 I'm going to discuss my opinion and draw my own conclusion. To start with, some educational institutions have rather comprehensive curricula. Students are asked to complete a lot of homework and meet the deadline to hand in the task on time.
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schoolers it's extremely stressful .
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, their parents are always there to give a helping hand. Since by doing that, they support their kids emotionally and give a smart guide on how to complete the exercise in the correct way. In my view,
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, moms and dads are doing hard to get their offspring prepared to the full extent. To illustrate, making a draft for an essay is a great rehearsal before taking part in the contest. Specifically, daily writing practice would pay off .
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 parents should always support their kids to do that.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • parental involvement
  • academic achievement
  • cognitive development
  • emotional bonding
  • supportive learning environment
  • skill enhancement
  • time management
  • holistic development
  • constructive feedback
  • behavioral patterns
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