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Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make ? Has this become a positive or negative development?

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In
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recent
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technology
 has conquered our lives, in which most
of
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people
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 needs depend on it.
However
, one of
the
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 most significant
contribution
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 of it is how it changed interaction and communication between
people
. It became a subject of
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 of whether it influenced our interaction positively or negatively.
Accordingly
, the current essay will discuss how
technology
 affected how
people
 communicate and if
this
 has a good or bad outcome.
To begin
 with,
technology
for
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a
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fact changed the way
people
 interact with each other. Considering the various method of interacting including, voice and video calls, texting apps and emails, it is not strange that
people
 will depend on them for easier and faster communication.
For example
,
people
 used to pay visits and travel for many miles in order to inquire if someone they know is doing
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 or not. Meanwhile, nowadays things have changed a single phone call will do the job perfectly. But the real question is, do these changes bring positive or negative development ? I believe that they are
mostly
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 advantageous rather than disadvantageous. Since
technology
 simplifies interactions and other functions, it brought
development
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in
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several life necessities,
in
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which
people
 will have difficulty
in
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living without it.
However
, studies
has
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 shown that it could develop
the
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 state of isolation and
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 not help introvert
to
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interact with
people
 leading many of them to stick with online rather than face-to-face interactions.
To conclude
,
technology
 evidently brought
people
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communicate
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 to another level which helped in many ways in everyday life.
Technology
 appears to have both positive and negative outcomes, but I believe that positive developments outrun the negative ones.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • technology
  • interact
  • relationships
  • connectivity
  • communication
  • online
  • face-to-face
  • friendships
  • romantic relationships
  • family dynamics
  • positive
  • negative
  • development
  • effects
  • formation
  • ease
  • impacts
  • communities
  • connect
  • interaction
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