There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the International music that is heard everywhere nowadays?

Nowadays,

music

is considered

as

Change preposition

apply

show examples

a major component of entertainment, art, business, and education. It is an important source of enjoyment

to

Change preposition

for

show examples

many people where they can relieve their stress and enjoy their

times

Fix the agreement mistake

time

show examples

. Various types of

musics

Change the wording

music

kinds of music

pieces of music

show examples

have spread worldwide, and become hyped and popular among many adults and youngsters.

This

,

however

, brings the question of whether

such

international

songs

surpassed the local ones or not.

Accordingly

,

this

essay intends to discuss how significant

music

has become part

life

Change preposition

of life

show examples

and which appears more important traditional or international

musics

Change the wording

music

kinds of music

pieces of music

show examples

.

To begin

with,

music

production which has a great and long history has always

remains

Change the verb form

remained

show examples

attractive to

the

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

listeners. It has several advantages

among

Change preposition

for

show examples

people.

For instance

,

songs

are heard as they

symbolizes

Change the verb form

symbolize

show examples

people

Change noun form

people's

show examples

feelings, and enhance their mood. It furthers an artistic area of education that reflect the

learners

Change to a genitive case

learner's

learners'

show examples

passion and talents that turn

to

Change preposition

into

show examples

a huge achievement

to

Change preposition

for

show examples

many of them.

However

, there is an argument

to

Change preposition

as to

show examples

which is more essential, international or traditional

musics

Change the wording

music

kinds of music

pieces of music

show examples

. Generally speaking, both sides seem significant since each traditional

musics

Change the wording

music

kinds of music

pieces of music

show examples

are

symbols

Fix the agreement mistake

symbol

show examples

of

culture

Add an article

the culture

show examples

and

represent

Correct subject-verb agreement

represents

show examples

various types of rhythm and tools that appear different compared to any other

songs

Fix the agreement mistake

song

show examples

. International

songs

and

music

,

however

, might be a

traditional

Replace the word

tradition

show examples

of another country or

a

Remove the article

music

a piece of music

show examples

music

that is

designed to attract

wide

Add an article

a wide

show examples

range of

audience

Fix the agreement mistake

audiences

show examples

.

For example

,

currently

Add a comma

,currently

show examples

korean

Change the capitalization

Korean

show examples

songs

have a huge number of fans all around the world and these

songs

are heard everywhere and

in

Change preposition

on

show examples

every platform.

Such

songs

have their own advantages as they expose the world to their type of

music

, cultures and customs. In short, the world of

music

is progressing

overtime

Correct your spelling

over time

show examples

and changing to various representations and versions. It has been proved that listening to

music

is a leisure

act

Replace the word

activity

show examples

that has

positive

Add an article

a positive

show examples

outcome

Fix the agreement mistake

outcomes

show examples

to

Change preposition

for

show examples

the hearer.

Furthermore

, whether the

music

is local or famous worldwide, both have

its

Correct pronoun usage

their

show examples

own beauty and reflection of cultures.