Some people believe that school children should not be given homework by their teachers, whereas others argue that homework plays an important role in the education of children. Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion.

Some people believe that

homework

given to

school

children

should be avoided by their teaching

staffs

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,

while

others think that

homework

is an essential factor for the

eduction

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of

children

. I would like to argue that

homeworks

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homework

are necessary for

school

kids

to gain more knowledge.

This

essay will discuss both views and conclude with my opinions. On the one hand, Few parents don't want their

kids

to concentrate on academics

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home

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.

Moreover

, they expect their

children

to focus more on doing extra-curricular

activities

after

school

.

It is clear that

the

child

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brain

struggle

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hard to focus on

same

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activity for a long period.

For instance

,

kids

who practice other

activities

like yoga, martial art, and sport are active and healthier when compared to normal students.

On the other hand

, Some guardians think that education is the primary duty of each and every student. They often assist their

children

in doing

homework

and consider education

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major part of their

children

's life. Some

children

are exhausted after

school

, but many parents force

children

to complete

homework

for their welfare. In my opinion,

Children

should be taught how to manage their time by taking up

homework

as well as

additional

activities

.

Furthermore

, an adequate amount of relaxation time should be provided to

kids

after reaching home from their

school

.

This

is illustrated by

that students

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those students

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who perform multiple

activities

throughout the day are physically and mentally fit. In conclusion, Parents should allow

children

to find their inner talents freely.

Homework

should be given without any shrunk deadline. Despite studying at home, many students fail to acquire appropriate knowledge and produce desired results.