The graph and table below show the average monthly temperatures and the average number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities. Summarize this information by selecting and reporting the main feautures and make comparison where relevant.

The graph and table below show the average monthly temperatures and the average number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities.

Summarize this information by selecting and reporting the main feautures and make comparison where relevant.
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The graph and table chart depicts, the climate and duration of
sunshine
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in the three main towns
such
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as
London
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, New
York
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, and
Sydney
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per year.
Overall
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, yearly, the hours of
sunshine
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in New
York
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and
Sydney
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are almost similar.
London
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has
least
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the least
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hours of
sunshine
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according to
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the table chart.
While
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in the winter ,season new
york
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and
London
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show their temperatures drastically decrease during January month, as per the line graph.
To begin
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,
with
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in
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Sydney
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, Climate in January is above 25 degrees. ,
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However
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Sydney
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and
London
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, is showing below 10
degree
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degrees
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in the winter season.
In addition
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to
this
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duration of
sunshine
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in
London
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falls at 1,180 hrs and New
york
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and
Sydney
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have nearly 100 hrs difference
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that
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which
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is 2,535 and 2473 respectively.
Furthermore
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, the peak
of
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apply
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temperature is on month
july
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July
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and the climate of new
york
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and
London
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comes near to 30 degrees
celcious
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celsius
.
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Consequently
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the temperature
on
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in
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Sydney
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on
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in
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july
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July
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will drop down to 15
degree
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degrees
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.
On
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the end of
a
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the
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year again new
york
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and
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london
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London
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reach
belwon
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between
below
10 and vice vasa
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sydney
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Sydney
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reach 25
degree
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degrees
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on
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in
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december
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December
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month
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words sunshine, london, york, sydney with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 2 times.
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