The charts below give information about the price of tickets on one airline between Sydney and Melbourne, Australia, over a two-week period in 2013.

The charts below give information about the price of tickets on one airline between Sydney and Melbourne, Australia, over a two-week period in 2013.
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The given bar graphs show data for the cost of airline tickets for flights between Sydney and Melbourne in both directions over two weeks in 2013.
Overall
, flights in both directions generally displayed patterns that are similar to one another, with higher prices from Friday through
Monday
.
Week
2 flight prices were either significantly reduced from
week
1 or remained identical. In
week
1, airfares from Sydney to Melbourne began at $80 on
Monday
and remained under $40 for the following three days before rising to $75, $70, and $50, respectively, on Friday, Saturday, and Sunday. The costs remained the same during the second
week
, with the notable exception of a drop on
Monday
to $50. The trend was similar for flights from Melbourne to Sydney, with the most expensive flight being on Friday at $80 (
week
1)
while
the lowest rate was at 35$ on Tuesday, Wednesday, and Thursday (
week
Fix the agreement mistake
weeks
show examples
1 and 2).
Finally
, there were declines of 10 to 20$ across Saturday, Sunday, and
Monday
in the second
week
.
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