The charts below give information about the price of tickets on one airline between Sydney and Melbourne, Australia, over a two-week period in 2013.

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The given bar graphs show data for the cost of airline tickets for flights between Sydney and Melbourne in both directions over two weeks in 2013.

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, flights in both directions generally displayed patterns that are similar to one another, with higher prices from Friday through

Monday

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Week

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2 flight prices were either significantly reduced from

week

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1 or remained identical. In

week

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1, airfares from Sydney to Melbourne began at $80 on

Monday

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and remained under $40 for the following three days before rising to $75, $70, and $50, respectively, on Friday, Saturday, and Sunday. The costs remained the same during the second

week

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, with the notable exception of a drop on

Monday

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to $50. The trend was similar for flights from Melbourne to Sydney, with the most expensive flight being on Friday at $80 (

week

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while

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the lowest rate was at 35$ on Tuesday, Wednesday, and Thursday (

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week

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weeks

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1 and 2).

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, there were declines of 10 to 20$ across Saturday, Sunday, and

Monday

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in the second

week

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Vocabulary: Replace the words monday, week with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "give" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 3 times.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

171 words

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The charts below give information about the price of tickets on one airline between Sydney and Melbourne, Australia, over a two-week period in 2013.

Nowadays many people complain that they have difficulties getting enough sleep. What problems can lack of sleep cause? What can be done about lack of sleep?

It is important for people to take risks, in both their professional lives and personal lives. Do the advantages of taking these risks outweigh the disadvantages?

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Due to poorer countries experiecing a 'brain drain' they are seeing many professionals, such as doctors and teachers, leaving to work in more developed countries. What problems does this cause? What solutions can be suggested to deal with these situations?

In some countries student pay their fees by themselves but in some countries it has been paid by government