Government investment in the arts, such as music and theatre, is a waste of money. Governments must invest this money in public services instead. Do you agree or disagree?
Government
investment in the arts is considered to be wasteful. Instead
, it should put more money into public services. It's disagreed that the government
finance only public services. Two arguments with explanations will prove this
in the following photographs.
Firstly
, when the regime spends more money on music
and theatre, this
will improve those fields. As a consequence
, the country will be more known, and this
will attract so many companies to invest in music
and theatre in the country. Which leads to more job opportunities , a better economy and tourism. For instance
, Lebanon is very known for its nice music
, and for that reason, popular companies like mbc choose Lebanon to be the place to run their most famous show like Arab idol. As a result
, numerous tourists will come to Lebanon. In short, this
ameliorates the country in so many ways.
Secondly
, besides
its benefits to the economy, it is also
advantageous to the people. There are so talented people, who found themselves only in the arts. If the government
won't pay attention to art, many will get lost and can't find their future. For example
, my friend from school is really talented in music
and wanted to be a musician one day, luckily, the government
has opened so many universities, centres, and museums related to music
. He feels so happy that he can pursue his dreams here.
In conclusion, I reiterate that the government
should pay attention to the arts due to
the several advantages of this
on the economy and also
the talented citizens, it provides a bright future for them.Submitted by mh.amani on
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