IELTS Writing Correction Service /
Writing Samples /
Band 4

some people believe that global warming is a hoax. While others claim it’s the biggest problem that mankind faces. Discuss both views and write your opinion on the topic.

#people #hoax #it’s #mankind #topic
These recent days, many people in our countries think global warming affects the development of our country in negative things .And
on the other hand
, the highly qualified countries ignore that issue because there not give them any benefit for improving our lifestyle and will face problems with a factory. even though big city always looking to make new gardens and find a solution for new sources of oxygen ,they can't stop the gases from our factories from polluting the air . Meanwhile, the hot weather in some countries needs coal and find a way a helps to decrease global warming .in my opinion global warming is a huge silent and quiet issue for a long time and it makes all the plane for improving society under the table.
finally
, any problems on
this
 earth may affect the planet,air and weather we deal with that issues with a strong plan to develop highly qualified life for people and avoid the side effect that may bring bad results on health .
Submitted by Haneen on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

What to do next:
Look at other essays: