Recent reserch suggests that the majority of criminals who are sent to prison commit crimes after they are released. Why is this the case? What can be done to solve this problem?

Nowadays, many
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believe that most
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offenders keep doing criminal activities even after they are out of prison. In
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phenomenon.
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, I will discuss why societies do not accept ex-criminals in their environment
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secondly
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, I will offer some solutions in terms of rehabilitation to the societies. One of the reasons why ex-prisoners fall out of the crime circle is
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societies tend
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accept those
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even if it was an insignificant crime.
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reason,
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who committed crimes often received a refusal from employers, their own families and friends.
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all these factors, those who are released might think that the best way to sustain their life is to re-offend in order to return to their relatives. Another cause could be related to the psychological side.
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, there are ex-criminals who have enough funds to resume their lives
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,
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their nature, they might continue to offend. There are some solutions to
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matter.
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, the government should introduce programs for the rehabilitation and reintegration of new convicts. Another way to reduce the number of recidivism is to change an individual's mindset.
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can be done by understanding that some convicts should have a second chance to change.
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, there are support groups which could help those
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to reintegrate into their previous life. In conclusion, if these methods are put into action, the number of offenders will eventually decrease.
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it depends on the attitude of the individuals, especially the relatives of those who are released and the actions of
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