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The table below shows the percentage use of four different fuel types to generate electricity in five Asian countries in 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The table below shows the percentage use of four different fuel types to generate electricity in five Asian countries in 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The given table illustrates the information
of
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 five different kinds of energy
power
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 that contribute to
electricity
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 in five Asian countries comprise to Malaysia, Singapore, Thailand, South
Korea
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 and
Japan
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. The number is given in percentages.
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, it can be seen that South-East Asia countries prefer to use coal & lignite and petroleum products for producing
electricity
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. Meanwhile, the majority of
electricity
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 in South
Korea
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 and
Japan
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 is made from clean energy, nuclear, hydro and wind.
According to
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 the data,
although
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, Thailand have no nuclear
power
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 to generate energy, petroleum product and other take closely the most occupy of used
power
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 36% and 42% respectively.
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 Singapore and Malaysia use coal & lignite to be the major
power
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 to produce
electricity
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 in their countries at 42% and 61% respectively, both nations use petroleum products at least. Renewable
power
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 is used in South
Korea
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 and
Japan
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 ,nuclear is used the most in
Japan
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 at 49%, and hydro & wind take the most in South
Korea
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.

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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words power, electricity, korea, japan with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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