The table below shows the percentage use of four different fuel types to generate electricity in five Asian countries in 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The table below shows the percentage use of four different fuel types to generate electricity in five Asian countries in 2005.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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five different kinds of energy
power
that contribute to
electricity
in five Asian countries comprise to Malaysia, Singapore, Thailand, South
Korea
and
Japan
. The number is given in percentages.
Overall
, it can be seen that South-East Asia countries prefer to use coal & lignite and petroleum products for producing
electricity
. Meanwhile, the majority of
electricity
in South
Korea
and
Japan
is made from clean energy, nuclear, hydro and wind.
According to
the data,
although
, Thailand have no nuclear
power
to generate energy, petroleum product and other take closely the most occupy of used
power
36% and 42% respectively.
While
Singapore and Malaysia use coal & lignite to be the major
power
to produce
electricity
in their countries at 42% and 61% respectively, both nations use petroleum products at least. Renewable
power
is used in South
Korea
and
Japan
,nuclear is used the most in
Japan
at 49%, and hydro & wind take the most in South
Korea
.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words power, electricity, korea, japan with synonyms.
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