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The following diagrams show a current map of Peyton Park and plans for proposed changes. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make a comparison where relevant.

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The diagrams depict information about existing landmarks inside
Peyton
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Park
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 and proposed changes in the future. It is evident that the landmarks in the
park
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 have changed and added some facilities
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 As shown in the figure, the current map of
Peyton
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Park
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 has a
lake
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 in the centre.
Tennis
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court
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 to the west of the
lake
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 and a
picnic
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area
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 to the north of the
lake
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, the
picnic
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area
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 is very close to the
tennis
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court
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. Both maps show the parking lot to the south of the
lake
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. In order to more convenience to the tourists who come to
Peyton
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Park
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, the
park
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 is proposed to make some changes. One of the most striking changes is that the
tennis
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court
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 is planned to be relocated to the east of the
lake
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. The
picnic
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area
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 will be moved to the north of the
tennis
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court
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. Located near the
picnic
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area
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 will be a new playground where the child can go playing. A swimming dock will be added to the west of the
lake
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.
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, significant shifts can be identified
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this
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 replacement;
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, the parking lot of
Peyton
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Park
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 remains unchanged.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words peyton, park, lake, tennis, court, picnic, area with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 4 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • diagrams
  • current map
  • proposed changes
  • summarize
  • main features
  • comparison
  • relevant
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