You have just started a course in a college which has no sports facilities of its own. Write a letter to the manager of the nearest private sports club. In you letter - introduce yourself - say why you are interested in this sports club - ask some questions about the club eg. facilities, members, costs.

#course #college #sports #facilities #manager #club #questions #eg #members #costs

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

this

to express my interest in joining your sports

club

. I recently joined Radhe college for my higher education and before ,that I was in the Swaminarayan school.

Additionally

, I am a cricket player in the Ranji trophy. I am a sports person and I play outdoor games almost every day. It keeps me fit and confident, but unfortunately, the college does not have its own sports facilities. I saw an advertisement for your services and found it interesting.

In addition

to that, your

club

offers a generous discount to university students. can you please let me know about the exact facilities you provide

along with

how many members your

club

has as of now ? It would be more helpful if you can send me your cost plans with a detailed break up which will help me to make my decision to join the

club

. I hope to hear from you soon. Yours faithfully, Kishan

Submitted by kishanpatel2550 on Wed Mar 08 2023

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