The chart below shows participation in certain leisure activities by children in Australia. Write a report for university lecturer describing the information shown below.

The chart below shows participation in certain leisure activities by children in Australia.

Write a report for university lecturer describing the information shown below.
The bar chart illustrates the involvement of Australian
boys
and
girls
ages 5 – 14 years in their
leisure
time in five different
activities
. It can be clearly seen that
boys
outweigh
girls
in almost all
recreation
Replace the word
recreational
show examples
activities
mentioned in the graph
such
as skateboarding or rollerblading bike riding, and electronic or computer gaming except the
activity
of art and craft where
girls
outweigh the
boys
. The
leisure
activity
of watching TV or videos shows an equal amount for both
boys
and
girls
.
To begin
with, skateboarding or rollerblading is the least popular
activity
for children in their free time, but
boys
are more involved in
this
leisure
activity
as compared to
girls
with a difference of approximately 16%. The
girls
showed a similar amount of involvement in the
leisure
activities
of bike riding and art and crafts i.e., nearly 58%.
However
,
boys
do bike riding approximately 20% more than
girls
which
is
Change the verb form
are
show examples
vice versa for the
activity
of art and craft where
girls
outweigh
boys
. The
activity
of electronic or computer gaming is most popular among
boys
as compared to
girls
with a difference of about 21%. Both
boys
and
girls
showed a similar 100% interest in watching TV or videos.
To sum up
, Australian
boys
are more involved in
leisure
activities
as compared to Australian
girls
.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words boys, girls, leisure, activities, activity with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "difference" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
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