he average standard of people's health is likely to be lower in the future than it is now. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Some
people
assert that the average standard of people
's health
tends to be worse than it is now. Is
there any Change the verb form
Are
merits
to Fix the agreement mistake
merit
this
belief? There are two reasons to support this
idea: firstly
, people
have been eating an unhealthy diet and secondly
, the resource of food
in the world will be limited so that people
cannot gain enough nutrition.
To begin
with, we must recognize that people
constantly have unhealthy dishes which have an adverse impact on their health
. These can include junk food
such
as french fries, hamburgers and instant nuddles. By way of an example, young people
eat a variety of unhealthy food
rather than healthy food
since they have financial issues. According to
an article in the Asahi Shimbun newspaper published last
month, eight out of ten Japanese university students have junk food
at least twice a week because such
food
is relatively inexpensive. As a result
, their health
condition is becoming worse.
As well as
this
, a shortage of food
may occur making people
cannot obtain nutrition as the population in the world is dramatically increasing. In fact, the research recently conducted by The University of Tokyo discovered that people
will not be able to obtain enough food
in 50 years. If this
unwanted situation will happen in the future, many people
may suffer health
issues. Therefore
, The government of Japan focuses on finding out a solution to avoid the problem.
In conclusion, we cannot deny that the health
condition of people
will be lower due to
the fact of their diet routine and the possibility of food
shortage which might happen in the near future. We must urgently consider solutions to keep people
healthy.Submitted by ryohei.1015.golf on
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