1.You have joined a new job recently. Write to your friend about your new job. In your letter •describe the reason for quitting the previous job •show your excitement for a new job and other details • say about your salary package

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Dear Upkar, I hope you are taking good care of yourself. I am writing

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letter to inform you about my new employment decision. As you were aware it was more than 5 years

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was stuck in the same role, which was in-person sales. I felt my growth plateaued and to reach the next tipping point I need to change my line of work, which involved more physical labour rather than mental labour. I am over the moon about my new

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decision. In

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, I do not have to travel to cities.

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is completely remote and you only have to do sales via cold calling or emails rather than my previous

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, which required an in-person human touch. We had a long discussion with regard to my salary. They had budget issues.

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, considering my past experiences and skills they gave me a 30% hike in comparison to the salary I drew in my

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. I look forward to hearing from you about your feelings about

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transition. Regards, Harsh

harshrewariWed Mar 08 2023

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

177 words

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