1.You have joined a new job recently. Write to your friend about your new job. In your letter •describe the reason for quitting the previous job •show your excitement for a new job and other details • say about your salary package

#job #friend #•describe #reason #•show #excitement #salary #package

Dear Upkar, I hope you are taking good care of yourself. I am writing

this

letter to inform you about my new employment decision. As you were aware it was more than 5 years

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since I

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was stuck in the same role, which was in-person sales. I felt my growth plateaued and to reach the next tipping point I need to change my line of work, which involved more physical labour rather than mental labour. I am over the moon about my new

job

decision. In

this

job

, I do not have to travel to cities.

This

job

is completely remote and you only have to do sales via cold calling or emails rather than my previous

job

, which required an in-person human touch. We had a long discussion with regard to my salary. They had budget issues.

However

, considering my past experiences and skills they gave me a 30% hike in comparison to the salary I drew in my

last

job

. I look forward to hearing from you about your feelings about

this

job

transition. Regards, Harsh

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8.50

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